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Old 07-01-2013, 02:13 PM   #1
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I write meaningless shit, sometimes...

For those interested I've recently added a new poem to my wordpress...

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Re: I write meaningless shit, sometimes...

I like it . I'm more a rhymey person but hey, each to their own. What inspired it exactly (other than "society")?
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Re: I write meaningless shit, sometimes...

I try to go between rhyming and not to be honest, I take a lot of inspiration from the beat generation where there really wasn't much form as such (see HOWL by Ginsberg).

That particular one was inspired by the recent adoration of fake celebrities and our hunger to define ourselves by people that are ultimately cretins.

Kris, I did see your FB message by the way, just getting round to answering it

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I found it brutal and honest in the most wonderful way, really nice piece, and very current. I don't think there is a single person today that couldn't relate to it in some way.

Will be reading the rest of your work, had no idea you did this!
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Re: I write meaningless shit, sometimes...

I read this in the voice of a black man.
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I found it brutal and honest in the most wonderful way, really nice piece, and very current. I don't think there is a single person today that couldn't relate to it in some way.

Will be reading the rest of your work, had no idea you did this!
Wow, Chris, Thanks for your words Glad you enjoyed it!

It's something I've done for a while but never even thought about putting it out into the public domain until I had 'therapy' last year (yep, most wouldn't of known that either ), I was encouraged to put my writings out into the world and it really helped!
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And well done for doing so mate, hidden talent right there, glad you shared :-)

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